Wednesday, March 18, 2009

Are you enjoy what you do it for living or you doing it just for survive?

When we think about this question the people don’t understand the real meaning, because a lot of people don’t have this problem but when you realize the question whit the people that really don’t have nothing you start to think that a lot of people that contribute to the society or to the city they don’t like the role played that they have.

To begin when you were young, the only thing that you think was in had fun, after many years you realize that is not important what you like to do for hobby or for fun, you had to think what are you going to do for living. And then you know that what you like is not the think that help you to survive.

For example many people in this country live from the ground and worked in that because that was the only thing that they saw for living and was the only thing that learn to do, then the war made them leave what they like to do or the only thing that they know. Furthermore they have to immigrate to the city that is a place that they never saw come to there live, and found first place to live, but for that they need money that the only way to have it is working, then to get a place some of them pass a lot of nights in the park or in the street while they found a job or some to do, if we realize they don’t do it for enjoy or for have a great experience outdoors is because the have to do it to survive and for the same reason they do whatever to get money to solve the basic problems such as food, housing and so can have a stable place as they had before being displaced from the ground the they had.


On the other hand we have works that are really nasty or are disgusting but someone have to do it. A lot of people that do this type of work, never imagine that that they are going to work in that for example the people that clean the garbage or the women that clean de houses for a stranger. There are things that we never think, like if the person that work in some work really liked or why they do it, or what is the history across the person that do it. How ere there are a middle class person that don’t enjoy what they do but they have to do it if they want be comfort or the other reason is to be save like the security live care.


To summarize when we see the people and we don’t treated well think that they don’t have to stand all your treatments because some of them don’t like that job, how ere you have to realize that the person have to be treated like one no more no less, because they have the same right that you but unfortunately not have the same opportunities

1 comment:

Irina's english blog lvl 8 #1 said...

1. Are you enjoy what you do it for living or you doing it just for survive? Grammar mistakes in the title, times. I would write “Do we have to chose our work according to our interests or a level of payment and prestige?”
2. check grammar
3. the sentences are too long and ideas a not clear. Make them shorter and more logically structure.
4. puctuation! Where are full stops?
5. reorganized your essay. You need to make your main idear clear, arguments to support, opposing arguments and conclusion.