It’s better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree ordisagree? Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay.Living outside the city may be healthier for the children, in some different ways. In thecountryside the air is cleaner, that is a good reason for people who wants theirs childrenlive outside big cities, because children would have fresh air to breath, theirs healthwould perfectly develop and they would be able to play without having to breathcontaminated air that big cities has. The contaminated air cause many medicalscomplicated like asma and other respiration illness.
In a society where money is necessary to live, many people prefer to live in big cities forgood education and all the job opportunities that this provides. But it has very importantaspects that you have to know to live on the big cities. We know that big cities has allthat can imagine, some things are good others are bad, like big population, carcongestion, insecurity and others that for adult is easy to overcome but for children ishard and in some causes dangerous.
For example if i live whit my son in galapa we will have a connection with the nature,where the air is pure and have low pollution generated us good healthy, people who livein countryside are more calm do not have a dynamic life, have the same job for a longtime, theirs children have the same school and create really good friends. This thing dothat children has calmness infancy.
In conclusion, I think that it’s better for children to grow up in the countryside. That iswhy; the first thing that we must save is health of our children.
Wednesday, March 18, 2009
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