Wednesday, March 18, 2009

evaluation

¿ Which place would you prefer to live in?

Live in a big city in not the same live in a small town. There are things that difference this place this place, in a big city how Barranquilla, you can find some thing, but to a price, in the country you cannot find all, however you can have essential thing that you serve for your necessity.

Live in a place, it depends of behaviour, personality, wish, dream and liking that has each people. It may appear that people are calm, do not like noise, they always live in a small town, in addition they say “the city never be silence”. While people that are very active, and like party, they are right for live in a big city.

Well, we do not forget the this place how all thing, have problem, for example in a small town can that do not have public service basic, in the same way in a big city your problem is contamination, people are conscience of this problem, they compare the problem and benefit of the place for they can take idea of when live.

The idea of live in fixed place change the pass in time, before is consequence because person change you way think, a young do not think and behave same than a old man, the place than they took, now they do not like.

In summary, all the place have characteristic that you have to evaluate, if you like it, of sure there you live for fixed time, even than you find other place where you like to live.

1 comment:

Irina's english blog lvl 8 #1 said...

1. Write a complete topic, even it’s long
2. Check spelling
3. Prepositions: depend ON something and so on
4. You need to answer which place YOU prefer to live in.
5. So, put the main idea – answer the question in the beginning and logically show why it is better than other places
6. Work on grammar and vocabulary usage, sometimes it’s difficult to understand your ideas
7. Check grammar