The goal of mass media is inform to others what happens in the world today, and celebrities are part of actual news. So when people are famous they are exposed to mass media.
I agree with the topic, because journalists need news all time, and when people are famous the journalists try to find something to talk about this people. In some cases celebrities are more importants news in the world. I think that is very importants the news about famous people, because it help to all persons to forget for few minutes about the bad news that happen every day. Paris Hilton is a big example to this, because she is a celebrity, but despite her young age she has made many shows shameful that people have talked a lot. For example, Paris show up in a sexual video with her boyfriend, and all people saw this.
The journalists shows many things about famous people. They show us bad things, and good things. Is very different if you get celebrity by doing good deeds. For example, Angelina Jolie, she is a celebrity but is very different to PAris Hilton, because she doesn´t shows and scandals of any kind. Although journalists/ paparazzis meedle in her life.
Many people think that journalists don´t respect the privacity to celebrities, but I don´t agree with this because their function is find interesting information. Some persons are disagree with mass media because they show us the celebrities life. I like show this.
In you are drunk in a bar is your problem and other people don´t see this, but is very different is a celebrity is drunk in a bar: this is a scandal!!! And the celebrity have to accepto this because is a celebrity!
1 comment:
Not “actual news” – latest, recent, hot, front-page news.
I agree with the topic, - don’t write this. I think you didn’t write your complete topic. In your essay write an original topic. It may be long, but anyway write it down.
this people – these people
for few minutes – a few minutes
shows shameful – the order of the word – “shameful shows”
Is very different – it’s your common mistake. “It” is missing. Look for another case in the essay where you omitted it.
Meedle – this wods doesn’t exist.
In general, your essay is good. I would recommend writing a stronger conclusion. You need to repeat your main idea and to summarize why your idea is right.
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