Global Warming
Topic: Is Global Warming the price we have to pay to have a good lifestyle?
People is destroying the planet, looking for more power and energy. However a lot of people think that this is the price we have to pay to have a good lifestyle.
The conservation of the planet is an issue that we should all be concerned, but is something people do not seem to care about too much. We should care more about our planet in order to keep it for further generations.
While people continue to pollute the air, and the big factories keep producing CO2. The Ozone layer will deteriorate more and more, causing what is know as Global Warming, the Global Warming can cause the destruction of some parts of the world, especially the ones near the poles and near the coasts, we can prevent this with simple solutions applied to our everyday lifestyle.
Even though conserving the planet is an important issue, some other people think that is even more important to have a good lifestyle, and it looks like the people who think like that are more than the people who actually care about the planet. Most of the people who do not care about the planet think that the Global Warming is a myth, but the truth is that the changes in the planet are becoming more and more visible with the pass of the time. And maybe the Global Warming would not affect them, but what we do now with the planet will affect further generations
In conclusion, we know that if we do not change our lifestyle, sooner or later Global Warming is going to affect us, but we also know that this is something we can change making some small changes to our way of life.
Topic: Is Global Warming the price we have to pay to have a good lifestyle?
People is destroying the planet, looking for more power and energy. However a lot of people think that this is the price we have to pay to have a good lifestyle.
The conservation of the planet is an issue that we should all be concerned, but is something people do not seem to care about too much. We should care more about our planet in order to keep it for further generations.
While people continue to pollute the air, and the big factories keep producing CO2. The Ozone layer will deteriorate more and more, causing what is know as Global Warming, the Global Warming can cause the destruction of some parts of the world, especially the ones near the poles and near the coasts, we can prevent this with simple solutions applied to our everyday lifestyle.
Even though conserving the planet is an important issue, some other people think that is even more important to have a good lifestyle, and it looks like the people who think like that are more than the people who actually care about the planet. Most of the people who do not care about the planet think that the Global Warming is a myth, but the truth is that the changes in the planet are becoming more and more visible with the pass of the time. And maybe the Global Warming would not affect them, but what we do now with the planet will affect further generations
In conclusion, we know that if we do not change our lifestyle, sooner or later Global Warming is going to affect us, but we also know that this is something we can change making some small changes to our way of life.
1 comment:
1. People is – people ARE [in English it is plural]
2. “it” is missing, check grammar
3. Your topic is not developed enough. What is your main idea?
4. Avoid descriptions, you need to write a persuasive essay . use arguments to support your idea
5. Introduction should be 4-5 sentences long
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