The study and education are a fundamental part in the life of each human. To reach the goal to have a responsible life, with a worthy job, a happy family and full health, its necessary to got to school to learn and then work hard.
In many ways, students do not go to the school; sometimes because they think that have other obligations or they think the school is lose the time. In addition, there are students that wish to have the best clothes, the best shoes or the best videogame.
In particular, when they have obligations, for example, when they are waiting a baby, they feel the necessity to look for a job to support the creature. Since people’s perspective, this is good if the family has not the economic resources.
Instead, young people not attending the school believe that money is earned working from the beginning, because the study is not essential for survival.
Actually most of the students leave the school to work for their luxury to compare or humiliate with their partners. Want to have the best fine shoes or the best cap, this is so bad because cause a material personality on teenagers.
It is very sad to see teenagers in some countries working on the street at traffic lights, cleaning the windows of cars or selling candy. In this case they don’t want to work, but their parents obligate them because they are so slack and don’t like to work honestly.
In conclusion, the teenagers should not work because they need a previous preparation to get a better job in a future to survive with honor and to support their future children and have a worthy life.
In many ways, students do not go to the school; sometimes because they think that have other obligations or they think the school is lose the time. In addition, there are students that wish to have the best clothes, the best shoes or the best videogame.
In particular, when they have obligations, for example, when they are waiting a baby, they feel the necessity to look for a job to support the creature. Since people’s perspective, this is good if the family has not the economic resources.
Instead, young people not attending the school believe that money is earned working from the beginning, because the study is not essential for survival.
Actually most of the students leave the school to work for their luxury to compare or humiliate with their partners. Want to have the best fine shoes or the best cap, this is so bad because cause a material personality on teenagers.
It is very sad to see teenagers in some countries working on the street at traffic lights, cleaning the windows of cars or selling candy. In this case they don’t want to work, but their parents obligate them because they are so slack and don’t like to work honestly.
In conclusion, the teenagers should not work because they need a previous preparation to get a better job in a future to survive with honor and to support their future children and have a worthy life.
2 comments:
1. Write your complete topic
2. Write full forms of the verbs: IT IS and etc.
3. Check grammar
4. the school is lose the time – school is a WASTE of time
5. vocabulary usage: parents obligate them – parent make them
6. check your spelling
7. your main idea is clear, but you need to support it logically. In every paragraph you need to show why it is so important to study. Use various ideas
answer the question of your topic. can or cannot students work during the studies?
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